Borne Upon the Wind - Chapter 1
Welcome to a new year, hopefully a good and healthy year for all of you. I am not one for making New Years resolutions, but I got up this blustery wet morning and looking myself in the mirror...
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Looking up, the buildings in this part of the city seemed enormous, crouching like great mythological beasts ready to leap up and devour him. Every window cloaked unseeing eyes and every doorway a...
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Ahhhhh! Please don't leave us hanging here too long! Love your descriptions:A cowl of uneasy darkness had settled over the city of San Francisco enshrouding it in thick rolling banks of fog. The...
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She's back! There's only one thing I'd rather do than read a story of yours. (no, I'm not telling)
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He knew exactly where he was going. His uncle had come to the city and sickened by the growing hatred and escalating violence, told the family of a most honorable man he had encountered in a small...
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What a brave start - throwing caution to the wind without a sense of where you will end up? What must that feel like? I have to admire your verve. I'm excited to have a new story from you to start my...
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Boy oh boy what a start! Who's the kid in San Francisco?What has Nick upset and what has happened in the Barkley mansion?
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What a tale - so much happening in so few words. Your descriptions are amazing:Looking up, the buildings in this part of the city seemed enormous, crouching like great mythological beasts ready to...
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Woohoo!!! A New Year and a new Kailaana story! It doesn't get any better than that! This exciting tale is off to a tremendous start. I can't wait to saddle up for the ride with you! Teehee, we have...
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*GASP!* What happened?!?!?! And what was Nick so upset about?! And what things did Heath have on his mind?! Please with more!!!
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Good heavens, you have thrown so many baits to us that it's impossible not to be hooked by this story already. So many questions just in this first chapter and that was a huge cliffhanger that you...
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Quote:A cowl of uneasy darkness had settled over the city of San Francisco enshrouding it in thick rolling banks of fog. The silvery mist falling from above blanketed and muted all sound except the...
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Wow ... what a beginning!! Riveting reading ... totally hooked and very concerned. Eagerly awaiting more!!
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I'm biting my nails. What's happened. Is "He' Jarrod? What's Nick so angry about and what is the devistating scene? start, now
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The situation was obviously not good when Heath left home, but it seems to be a whole lot worse now he's come back....what has happened??!! Was Nick worried and and at odds with Jarrod before Heath...
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I am so excited to see another story by you, Kailaana! This one is starting with so many questions I need answers to. Wonderful writing and when you can!!
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Kailaana:Well, what a nice new year's surprise - a new story from you!!! So glad you decided to throw caution to the wind - I give you credit - I can't do it - with Home Alone, I'm almost done and...
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was something said about the Barkeys in the paper? Is jarrod the one Nick is angry with?and what did Heath run into when he opened the door?
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Definitely beautiful descriptions, yes, absolutely! And plenty of suspense and timing to go with them----I felt like I was about to be as shocked as Heath when he opened that door! What was Nick...
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